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    June 17

    《离歌》

     
        唔知大家有冇体过《比悲伤更悲伤的故事》E出韩剧,系校长推荐比我地的,剧情都几意外,也很感人。
        很喜欢果首片尾曲《再也没有这样的人》,好似系李承哲唱嘅。
        毕业就近,加上旋律抒情,于是重新填左下粤语词,起名:《离歌》。很俗啊嗬?哈哈。
        如下。很抱歉,我唔知原曲作曲着系边个,所以系“未知”。
     
        离歌
     
            Music: unknown  
           Chinese Lyric: CJN
     
    默默唱歌 唱出今天的你我
    一首一首 写不出我 饮 歌
    慢慢唱歌 如果走音很多
    仍能排练到你走远剩我
     
    喜欢你们陪我坐
    即管笑足一粒钟
    如样样事 在也能说很多
     
    如今我心 情能拿到几多分
    谁又知 它得过甲
    就似没法甘心
    越有这感触要靠近,越要挣扎去独行
    然后 期待有欢声笑泪印
     
    EM....
     
    [ps]浪浪有声 海一般眼睛
    汹涌翻飞 再都不要清醒
    夜夜晚星 连数都数不清
    全球人梦里也可以任性[ps]
     
    很想我们无界限
    开心痛苦三餐可
    来谈谈前路亦无憾当初

    从始至今 沿途有几多人
    愿意 将心给你放
    就算无法分心
    越要去分享这灵魂,越要花心机讲真
    成就 明日这青春战友
     
    离歌唱起 可惜这刻已关机
    许多音准不衬歌
    忘掉昨日作这歌
    没法说出请快别问 没法想起怎舍得
    良朋 来让我写出你同感
     
      
    PS. 由于作词的灵感,系我用粤语随口哼左某一句歌,但真系写词果阵居然又无用到E句歌,我突然觉得几可惜。哈哈。
         SO, 我用我原来的灵感重新填了[PS]E段歌词,见下。请大家投票选下用边段歌词会比较好D,以上果段成为A,下面这段称为B。
         欢迎大家评论度投票。~~>_<
     
    B段:
    事事有心 多得这笑星
                                           操心担心 也都不过关心   -->E句就系我的灵感歌词 >_<
     问问你心 无论可否亲身
    全力来让你过得有力气

    Comments (6)

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    Gelada Qiuwrote:
    果句灵感歌词我中意·····
    June 22
    Penguinwrote:
    不是冲突啦……只是感觉~后面的歌词都是围绕A段写的,如果直接拿另外一段歌词套上去不是不行,但觉得不太合适咯

    居然系A- -!
    June 21
    Rexwrote:
    我选ABA!
    自家的孩子嘛...o(∩_∩)o...哈哈
    June 19
    JN Cwrote:
    嘻嘻唔系噶,我中意A的原本,不过我喜欢B段那句灵感~~改下面嘛,我倒没想过·~~意思有冲突吗?
    June 19
    Penguinwrote:
    突然上到来居然有更新,好似N年没登陆过MSN了,好采个帐号没被CUT掉,貌似都改了不少?不能改名了……不好玩

    好似系不同取向的呢
    同照相,我觉得你会更中意B而我会选A
    而且感觉上A段下面的歌词都系围绕A段作的嘛,如果用B段下面的歌词应该也要全部改掉吧?
    June 18
    JN Cwrote:
    正所谓,都是自家孩子,哪有贵贱啊,哈哈,SO,我把单选的权利留给大家,多选的权利只有我啦:
    AB!
    哈哈哈。
    June 17

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