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    09 June

    <雨天奏鸣曲>

    雨天奏鸣曲
     
    风扇慢慢地转动
    带来 暴风雨前的阴霾
    带来 错觉中的阵阵节拍
    我以为 大雨 已经落下来
    其实 满腔的热情还在后台
     
    *
    你的表情 总让人捉摸不来
    笼罩了你的光彩,
    就容易误解了你的爱
    一直幻想,好愉快...... *
     
     
    听见浑厚的低音
    我带着迷惘看着窗外
    看着雨点们的迫不及待
    奋不顾身在面前落下来
    终于 爆发的魅力排山倒海
     
    repeat **
     
     
    你的声音 总让人莫名崇拜
    习惯了你的到来,
    就让我忘了我的存在
    一直看你,好愉快......
     
    *第二部曲~

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    国师,N年无见到你的留言了
    14 June
    Jessiewrote:
    有才华的你。。
    写得很好,读理科真的有点可惜哦。。
    等都写完了把题目改一改吧,一些地方也可以再修改,
    加油!!
    11 June
    Ryanwrote:
    还是比较喜欢第一首...第一首很忧郁,通过压抑自己的感情去表达爱...也很动人...第二首好似将自己爱慕的感情表露的很明显,也很有动感...可我还是比较喜欢含蓄~
    10 June
    写得好啊!羡慕中,我无灵感啊~
    10 June
    荣金 郑wrote:
    俺是第一个看到喔~~期待旋律
    10 June

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